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[催眠控制] 【我所懊悔终生的催眠】（白鸟BE结局一）

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一口气读完，白鸟的结局过于简略了，读者只能通过自己脑补想象白鸟的遭遇，画面简单，体现不出白鸟的悲惨下场，可能不是作者理想中完美的结局，感觉有点草率，只是告诉读者白鸟的下场，无非就是被催眠，被轮上，没有什么新颖
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