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[绿意盎然] 【小西的美母教师的改编后作】第一章

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回帖鼓励一下，写作手法上还是有待提高，人物行为和刻画和原著性格差距有点高，标点断句有点问题，看起来有点吃力。建议如果有兴趣写的话，可以写写一些短篇练一练手
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